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Like infants fascinated with their own reflection, the lovers' eyes touched, bewildered with the wild ferocity with which each's love was returned. Shyly, his eyes sunk, her smoldering eyes still lingering about the sunset dying in the contours of his dark face. With the soft fumbling of a hummingbird's nosing of an even softer petal, her slender fingers danced an intimate, desperate dance around his in the galactic hush of the backseat. Nested in a purple, aching void, the lovers silenced the madness pounding against the glass for but a moment. Drag.
Feel.
Release.
(WakeMed North E.R. 8.9.11)
feedback welcome.
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Given 2013-06-18
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Foxfire96 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD. :) This is beautiful. I like your writing style.
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introverted-ghost Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013   Writer
This is beautiful.
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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octobird Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Contrared Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
FAAAAAAAAAAANTASTIC!
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tirasunil Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student Writer
Congrats on the DD! May I ask, where is this WakeMed? The one I am familiar with is in Raleigh, North Carolina.
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OliverKloezoff Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student
oh hell yeah, its totally in raleigh, up on falls of the neuse, how i miss homee
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tirasunil Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Student Writer
Ohh wow, I used to live in Durham...in Goldsboro now. My father visits parishioners there frequently.
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halla
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TooLucia Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
Beautiful! :)
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JKRavensfield Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is brilliant.
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bbeyond13 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
I love the details
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Shenzan Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice work :3 Congrats on the DD c:
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Karinta Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Very clever. I love the imagery.
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nicolasjolly Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Beautiful work!
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Schneefuechsin Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Congratulations on the DD! :hug:
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lintu47 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    Congrats on the DD! :dalove:
    Have a nice day! :heart:
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MangaAnimeLover Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hello :)
I have a small "critique" for you. Just a thing I came to think about when reading:
In the sentence "bewildered with the wild ferocity", I find the word "wild" unecessary. "Bewildered" and "ferocity" already gives the feeling of "wild", so I think it's better to let the word remain unsaid ;)
Anyway, congrats with the DD :)
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OliverKloezoff Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student
Agreed, that had always rubbed me strange in the back of my head. Changing it though would be like relighting and re-blowing out the candles now that I'm commenting on a DD, haha, but I'll keep it in mind. Thank you again (:
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OliverKloezoff Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student
i can't remember myself why i write sometimes so it's nice to hear such. thank yall (:
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love-souleater Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
whoa that was BEAUTIFUL :iconbravoplz:
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xaidenlovelyx Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful.<3
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Savaliste Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013
CONGRATZ :iconbravoplz:
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